I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 8 and in 2021 I will be a year 9. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Wednesday, 30 June 2021
Tuesday, 22 June 2021
The ‘Red, White and Blue’ Sentence
The ‘Red, White and Blue’ Sentence:
Use the red, white and blue sentence style when you have several ideas to convey about a topic.
Examples:
Successful students are focused, punctual and hard working.
The Earth’s key resources are clean air, fresh water and natural environments.
Sunshine, water and friends make for a perfect weekend adventure.
The ‘Power’ Sentence
The ‘Power’ Sentence:
If you find you waffle, try using a power sentence Begin your paragraph with a power sentence of 12 words or less. Get straight to the point.
Examples:
Quality coaching is fundamental to sporting success.
Early starts decrease student learning outcomes.
What is right, isn’t always popular.
Money does buy happiness.
I quietly snuck out the house.
The ‘ing’ Sentence
The ‘ing’ Sentence:
Try starting the sentence with the ‘ing’ form of the verb.
Remember the rule- when you have finished your -ing phrase, place a comma, then write the rest of the sentence.
Some ‘ing’ words you can use- listening, watching, running, realising, emerging, grasping, speaking, analysing, signaling, exposing
Examples:
Realising the danger, people fled from the cities.
Shaking away the nerves, he walked towards the microphone.
Looking at them dead in the eyes, I did a Fortnite dance. Killing the person quietly, I buried the body in my neighbours yard.
The ‘ed’ Sentence
The ‘ed’ Sentence:
Try starting the sentence with the ‘ed’ form of the verb. It makes for a punchy start to the sentence
Remember the rule- when you have finished your -ed phrase, place a comma, then write the rest of the sentence.
Some ‘ed’ words you can use- surprised, excited, committed, undaunted, determined, overpowered, concerned, cornered, delighted, enthralled
Examples:
Determined to win, Tony pushed himself harder in the last meters of the sprint.
Concerned for the well being of others, the Prime Minister passed new laws.
Possessed by a ghost i was possessed.
The ‘W’ Sentence.
The ‘W’ Sentence:
Try starting the sentence with a ‘w’ word. These sentences make your work sound thoughtful and knowledgeable.
Remember the rule- not ever ‘w’ word works as a sentence starter. Remember to put your comma in when the parts of the sentence affected why your ‘w’ are finished
Some ‘w’ words you can use- who, while, whereas, when, where, what, whilst, with
Examples:
Whilst the teacher was talking, the students were pretending to listen.
With a majority of votes, Hitler seized power in Germany.