One day my parents took me to an amazing, colourful and beautiful fun place. My sister was turning 6. I wanted to go on the slide . I ran like the wind. I got in line when it was finally it was my turn . I put my hands on the slide. I was so reluctant I just wanted to go home. But there was a big line behind me . So the only way home was going down the slide. I held my breath and counted to 3 1,2,3, . I slid down the slide I screamed all way down the slide .
BOOM!!! CRASH!!! THUD!!! I face planted into some balls . I felt my face a lollipop was on my cheek ooo yuck I pulled it off. I saw a skeleton , some balls fell down Hiss! I looked up it was the way up and out of the pit. So I started to climb up the ball wall it took a long time. I jumped to another ball wall I nearly fell off. I looked up oh no I saw a plaster it fell down it went into my mouth I quickly closed my mouth so I don’t swallow the plaster.I tried to take the plaster off I lost my grip I held on to anything I could I held onto a lollipop I was surprised it could hold me up. I kept on climbing finally I was at the top I looked at the lollipop yucky I thought then I put it in my mouth yum
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