- Helpful * maybe make it a bit more understanding
- Thoughtful * I like the concept of all the details
- positive * I really like the detail you put in your story and I like the characters
that is what they said (they put an and after a full stop lol)
I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 8 and in 2021 I will be a year 9. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say
3. Something helpful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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ReplyDeletehello Odin its Jamie and just a question isn't that the same as elias or is it different? it looks pretty cool but what is it though?
ReplyDeletesigned Jamie