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Thursday, 9 March 2017

ruin writing

we have been writing a story about a video.


Once upon a time I was a man in an  abandoned city I was in a skyscraper I  pushed a garbage crate off the eighty  seventh floor. I jumped down off the skyscraper.

I kicked the garbage crate it flung open, I found a phone screen it had  some information, why they were after me? Suddenly BANG! BANG! CRASH! They were coming . I ran to my motorbike. Then I saw a gyrocopter so I quickly started my motorbike and drove off .it was after me. My motorbike reached full speed.I looked behind me the gyrocopter sent out some gyrodroids.

I lit dynamite and I threw one behind me it only blew one up. Two more to go. I lit another dynamite this time they both dodged it. I saw a sign that said Cameron FWY downtown tunnel no trucks. One of the gyro droids we're getting  ready to shoot BOOM! I dodged it. I lit my last dynamite I threw it on the ceiling of the tunnel 321 BOOM! Both of the gyro droids blew up. I stopped the motorbike and turned round then I started my motor bike.

I was surprised the gyrocopter was there it started shooting I started driving I dodged all the bullets I went as fast as I possibly could I saw some rocks in the distance I decided to use them as a ramp I took out a sword. I went up the ramp seperated from my motorbike. I did a flip landed sword first into the gyrocopter BOOM!!! I jumped off the gyrocopter just in time I fell into a ditch I saw a gyrodroid it was ready  to shoot BOOM!

The End!

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