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Friday, 31 March 2017






         Tom True heart
Once upon a time I was in my house one strange night. I was in bed with my 6 brothers and brides.In the middle of the night I heard something. I closed my eyes and hid under my covers. then I heard a voice that said come on boys  I have the kids let's go. Then I jumped out of my bed and grabbed my sword and a light and a wooden shield. then put on a woolly jacket. Then I heard a van. I went outside  to chase the van then something fell out of it I pressed a button. poof! I was telepored to another dimension .

Just then I heard something. It was a giant, hairy,scary, disgusting crow I saw an old looking berry tree.  I decided to climb it and I took a red berry from the tree. Then I took a berry with me. I jumped out of the tree with the berry. The crow could smell the scent of the berry and came down to eat the berry so I quickly jumped on the crow.The crow was so fast I nearly fell off.

Then I saw an old, ancient looking castle.I jumped off the crow and walked into the castle. then right behind me was a humongous ,mysterious, hairy beast. I ran for my life.I saw a glow on my sword the glow got bigger and bigger. I touched it. I got an electric shock. I stopped running  from the beast. I threw a sword at the beast. That will save me some time. I found a key I took the key then I ran to a cage. I saw my brothers and brides. I unlocked  the cage got my bothers and brides lets go but the giant ,beast was after us we quickly got on the crow then got home.



The End.

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