This is my story about The cloud, before we started writing we had to watch the video carefully then think sbout how you would feel. Then once we started writing, we started adding puntuation, juciy words and make sure the sentence make sence. Once we had finished our story we had to post it on our blog, I hope you like my story and I hope you have a great time😺.
The cloud
Once upon a time, there once was an incredible, white, fat cloud that was not like any other clouds. Other clouds in the group liked to destroy homes and make people homeless one day in Wellington, he was feeling sad for those people. That’s why he thought that he should help those people that need help. One day in the morning, every cloud moved to a country called Australia and that same cloud went to the city without any other clouds and looked for the people that needed help, but no one even needed his help. This cloud thought that he was special, he was kind, fluffy, helpful, brave, clever and friendly.
I was going on an adventure that was going to take a long period of time. I decided to leave straight away. I secretly snuck off to town, it was a nice sunny day then I saw TNT. I thought that it would kill somebody so I thought how I could destroy it. Then I saw an axe shop, I went to the axe shop straight away, I still had some money from my friend, I counted my money I had $246.80, woohoo I've got enough money for an axe. So I asked the man if I could buy a silver, glimmering, sparkly axe he said yes, I got 80 cents change I rushed outside my plan was to cut the TNT in half and take the gunpowder out. So I rushed to the TNT and cut it in half the steel part of the axe touched the gunpowder the sun reflected on the steel, then suddenly the steel started to heat up the gunpowder then the TNT blew up,then BOOM!!!
