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Friday, 30 June 2017

alma

alma
I was waddling in a small,narrow,snowy,frosted and rainy city. Once you were 13 you could write your name on the city blackboard I Found the chalk.and wrote my name.

Then I turned around I saw something that Caught my eye. It was a doll not just any ordinary doll it was me. I wiped the window. So I could see better wow I thought. I really wanted it. So I tried to open the door but I couldn't open the door. It was locked.

I threw a snowball at the door and it opened so I moseyed into the shop I had a little look around then I looked at the doll then I stepped on a zombie on a bike I  put the zombie on  its bike then it crashed into the door .

I looked up at the table at the doll it wasn't there. so I looked up on the shelf, I found it so I grabbed the doll then it got all freaked out then I got stuck inside the doll.

THE END

1 comment:

  1. Hi Odin, Nice story and I liked reading it. It made me feel like that I was really there. Nice work, keep it up.

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