The boy in the red coat
I am the boy wearing a bright red coat like blood. I am walking around the huge and busy, rusty, crowded, big and smelly city because I was looking for something to do. I was dragging the rest of my body. Then I got tired so I sat down.
I was starving so I got a net I saw a bird so I ran up to the bird chased the bird then I threw the net. I caught the bird with a net then I ate the bird and got sick I was vomiting everywhere. then I saw my mum I ran to her and she ran to me I gave her a big hug. I was so happy to see her I told her that I was sitting on the side of the road. Then mum took me home and got me medicine then I stopped vomiting.
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