Once upon a time there were three little birds named Pumpkin, Peachy and Odin. My brothers and I were so hungry our bellies were rumbling, then I jumped out of the nest. I saw a scrumptious muffin! Then an idea popped into my head. I told my brothers the idea. Peachy hopped on top of Pumpkin then I hopped on top of Peachy but we still couldn't reach the scrumptious muffin. Then I found two pieces of wood. I thought of what I could do with it, I made a seesaw. So I jumped on one side then Pumpkin and Peachy jumped on the other side. I went flying in the air, then I landed next to the scrumptious muffin and fell off the window sill onto the ground. Then we quit trying to get the scrumptious muffin. We went back to our nest. I saw mum above us then she dropped a worm. We didn't want it so we didn't eat it.
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Hi Odin, it is me Ranit. I like your writing and I like how you said my brothers were hungry and their bellies started rumbling, I like your story alot, keep up the good work.
ReplyDeleteHi Odin it Michaela, here.I like your writing I like you start you writing I like the part where you said for the name pumpkin peachy and Odin part is so funny next time can you put capital letters in the right spot just keep up the good work.
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